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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

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作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;全文结构较为严谨;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。

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With rapid development of computers nowadays,those are our normal goods in our daily life.However,every coins have two sides,including the computers.The problem between computers and men is increasing,the situation becoming more terrible.There is my opinion that the situation between computers and men. On the one hand,men reply on the computers to work what difficult the things are,saving a lot of time and money.On the other hand,men against doing their own works,they wish that computers can do whatever they want.They become more stupid and lazy.At present,computers are tools to men,but we couldn't measure that computers willn't threaten the happiness of human bebings. In short,men can't reply on computers absolutely.

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