题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章层次较为清晰。
With rapid development of computers nowadays,those are our normal goods in our daily life.However,every coins have two sides,including the computers.The problem between computers and men is increasing,the situation becoming more terrible.There is my opinion that the situation between computers and men. On the one hand,men reply on the computers to work what difficult the things are,saving a lot of time and money.On the other hand,men against doing their own works,they wish that computers can do whatever they want.They become more stupid and lazy.At present,computers are tools to men,but we couldn't measure that the happiness of human bebings willn't be threaten by computers. In short,men can't reply on computers absolutely.