2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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With rapid development of computers nowadays,those are our normal goods in our daily life.However,every coins have two sides,including the computers.The problem between computers and men is increasing,the situation becoming more terrible.There is my opinion that the situation between computers and men. On the one hand,men reply on the computers to work what difficult the things are,saving a lot of time and money.On the other hand,men against doing their own works,they wish that computers can do whatever they want.They become more stupid and lazy.At present,computers are tools to men,but we couldn't measure that the happiness of human beings willn't be threatened by computers. In short,men can't reply on computers absolutely.