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The Impact Of The Internet On Interpersonal Communication When we go to a library,you can find that there a gigantic number of books,which are talk about the ways of communicating with others.So,we can easily realize the magnitude of interpersonal communication. Interpersonal communication has a heap of effects on people'life. Firstly,it can help us to stay with others agreeably.On the one hand,only we communicate with others can we make friends with them.On the other hand,people,who have the good interpersonal communication,usually feel more happier than those have not. Secondly,interpersonal communication can help us resolve problems,which is out of control. Last but not least,we can find some drawbacks on our characters,through interpersonal communication,and then make us perfect.
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