2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；学术词汇使用熟练，不过请注意单词拼写的检查；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

ever since humans have lived on the earth,they have made use of various form of tools to communicate.do you believe what i said,just as you trust me or n't.with the development of the economic and technology,we face lots of temptations at face.thus this is the reason why we should maintain trust on each other. nowadays the majority of people lost trust when they are stand in fornt of the benfit and money .what we need to do and we should do ? we will insist on our pursuit and spirit,not yeild to anything.just as a old word run"honesty is the best policy". not only we need to trust people but also we establish our relationship in trust.on maintaining trust is a least necessary for you.everyone trust me and i trust everybody.it is convinced that we wil have a gloden future which base on the trust.