题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;全文结构较为严谨。
Undoubtedly,the computer plays a vital role in our daily lives but as the saying goes"The real danger is not that the computer will begin to think like man,but that man will begin to think like the computer." As we all know,we apply our idea to making computer's procedure thus the computer will be more and more likely to think like man.However,man shouldn't think like the computer.Man has lots of characters that computer without such as will or soul.It's important to show man's excellent characters to distinguish from machines.Man is supposed to consider problems in various of directions rather than follow a routine way. I believe that computers will never take place of man.