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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;全文结构较为严谨。

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Undoubtedly,the computer plays a vital role in our daily lives but as the saying goes"The real danger is not that the computer will start to think like a man,but that man will begin to think like the computer." As we all know,we apply our idea to making computer's procedure thus the computer will be more and more likely to think like a man.However,men shouldn't think like the computer.Men has lots of characters such as will or soul that computer has not.It's important to show man's excellent characters to distinguish from machines.Men is supposed to consider problems in various directions rather than follow a routine way. I believe that computers will never take the place of man.

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