2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文中较熟练地使用学术词汇，但词汇量仍需积累；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

From the Bureau of Labor Statistics, we can learn that people's income increase and unemployment rate decrease with their education levels. Nowadays, with the development of science and technology, most of the corporations are required highly educated's talents. On the one hand, They mastered by learning a lot of knowledge in school. On the other hand, it's easy that they can learn skillfully jobs more than low degree. At the same times, as time goes by them still keep up with age through their study ability. Therefore, the low degree's people only working on construction sites, factories, restaurants and home services industry, those jobs has one common that are low wage. In my opinion, education pays is necessary. Today is an era of secien and technology, we want to look for good job and highly wage that only learn most knowledge.