Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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From the Bureau of Labor Statistics, we can learn that people's income increase and unemployment rate decrease with their education levels. Nowadays, with the development of science and technology, most of the corporations are required highly educated's talents. On the one hand, They mastered by learning a lot of knowledge in school. On the other hand, it's easy that they can learn skillfully jobs more than low degree. At the same times, as time goes by they can still keep up with the times through their ability to learn. Therefore, the low degree's people only working on construction sites, factories, restaurants and home services industry, those jobs have one common that are the low wage. In my opinion, education pays is necessary. Today is an era of science and technology, we want to look for good job and highly wage that only study most knowledge.