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my good friend is a very lovely girl .we often go to school together . she very like singing . so she often teach me to singing. we do all the thing together. but when we go to college , we start to go along . i don't konw why it come to be . i often thingk the things when we are young , but the things is pass, can't come back .i wish we can be happiness in our life.