中考考前作文集中训练附范文15:My Favorite Sport

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My favorite sport is swimming. Because I like the feel of in the water . I think it is interesting and exciting. I usually go to swim after work at the swimming pool near my apartment. Swimming makes me healthy and happy. After swimming I take a shower，it's very comfortable.I like swimming.