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中考考前作文集中训练附范文15:My Favorite Sport

发布时间:2014-05-29 17:55浏览次数:377
要求:
请你以My Favorite Sport为题,谈谈你最喜爱的一项体育活动,你喜爱的原因以及感受等。

要求:词数约30词。


My Favorite Sport
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单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织;请注意分段。

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My Favorite Sport My favorite sport is playing basketball. Because I think it is interesting and exciting. I often play basketball with my friends on the playground after school. Playing basketball makes me healthy and happy. I want to be a basketball player in the future. My favorite sport is swimming. Because I like the feel of in the water . I think it is interesting and exciting. I usually go to swim after work at the swimming pool near my apartment. Swimming makes me healthy and happy. After swimming I take a shower,it's very comfortable.I like swimming.

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