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2005年考研英语作文真题:A letter to your Mr.Wan

发布时间:2013-05-20 21:55浏览次数:1803
要求:
题目 A letter to your Mr. Wan
说明 Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & fashions. But now you find that the word is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason (s), and making an apology.
要求
1.Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang
2.Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
3.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.
字数:100满分:100分

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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;从句使用量稍显不足;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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Jun 22, 2005 Dear Mr. Wang, First of all, please allow me to express my deep sorry to you for my resignation. I do know that this will bring about much trouble to you so that I write to you for my explanation. I decided to quit for some reasons as follows. To begin with, the job as an editor for the magazine Designs

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