拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;从句使用量稍显不足;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Jun 22, 2005 Dear Mr. Wang, First of all, please allow me to express my deep sorry to you for my resignation. I do know that this will bring about much trouble to you so that I write to you for my explanation. I decided to quit for some reasons as follows. To begin with, the job as an editor for the magazine Designs