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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；连词使用偏少。
This chart is about the relationship between degree of education and the number of earning . From this chart we know the higher degree educated the more salary you earned. Now, it is hardly see children in normal family were not attended to sent to school . education is important . getting knowledge means having ability to change you or your family or the world .but we should understand education is not only means books' knowledge but but the ability of working with others. In a word , education is important for everyone ,no matter which country you belong to , what things you interested , how old are you in , study now ,change now.
