作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;连词使用偏少。
this summer , i want to go to Beijing and i will take notebook and my phone .i think it's very relaxing and interesting ! sure,after that, i must do my homework and help my mother do housework or i'll get bad feel.then i should go to beach with my friends. last day i will climb mountain with my sister , oh ~ it must be exciting !