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2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:33浏览次数:1998
要求:
1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游 
2、出现这种现象的原因 

3、这种现象可能产生的影响 

表格:

1995   2000  2005 
1万人   近4万 12万以上 

用户的作文(系统评分84.5分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者在句法层面做的很棒;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累。

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Make your life more meaningful The saying "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it" has been shared by people throughout the world.However,the high-pressure of modern society makes more and more people feel their life more meaningless as well as out of passion. As for how to make life more meaningful,some measures should be taken to encourage people to recover their passion for life as soon as possible.First and foremost,relevant authorities should perfect their social system to raise people's awareness to take an active part in social colorful activities,such as voluntary work , sports meeting and so on. When you help others or make efforts to do such a meaningful thing that you consider it a important ,you will not only earn others respect ,but exert a positive influence on others around you and exactly make your life more meaningfully.

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