2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。

Computer and man With the development of science,computer is playing a necessary role in our day-to-day life.It gradually influence our kinds of life. It is usefui to our study and work.First the most important,spare infermations by Intern can benifit us to learn more acknowledge,in addition , we can make full use of it to work well. But every coin has two sides.Computer make us be used to relying on other,which lead to that creative cantnot be improved. Taking into account all these factors,we realieaze that only takeing corrent measures,we can use computer well.In my opinion,we should have a skill that we can know some informations advantages and disadvantages and choose it.Only in this way can we be friendly with computer.