请作者增加学术词汇的使用,不过单词拼写做的很好;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
Are you interested in reading a wonderful book if you are free? If you do,I'd love to introduce a fable to you,which abound in wit and humor. The novel is called The Million Pound Note that is written by a extremely famous author named Mark Twain.The book tells a fortuitous adventure about a poor boy called Henry Adams when he was in London.Once there were two rich men,making a bet with each other,giving a check which could never be cashed to the boy,looking forward to what would happen.As time went by,Henry not only didn't starve to death or arrest by the police,but he was a millionaire himself and a charming lady fell in love with him at the same time. What the author intended to express is the sarcastic emotion,which we could easily find it out around the passage.Never miss such a fantastic book,will you?