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2001年1月英语六级作文真题:面试成功的因素

发布时间:2013-05-14 19:08浏览次数:2299
要求:

Directions:  For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 

1. 面试在求职过程中的作用  

2. 取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……   

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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

How to Succeed in A Job Interneview? As we all know,a job interview is the first and the one of the most important part to get a offer in a company.So we must think hightly of it. The job interview plays a very important roll to let the leaders know us.First of all,it is a good opportunity for us to show ouself,and tell leaders our ability.Secand,we also can know more about the company by the job interview.What's more,it's high-effecient for the company and us to judge that it is suitable for each other. Most of us want to pass the job interview successfully.It depands on lots of factors.For example,we must be carefull in dress,and make a good impression as soon as porsible.Besides,we should be confident and smart to introduce ourself and our knowledge.The most important is we should practice in different places,because it need a lot of experience. All in all,we must prepare for a job interview enough.

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