2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

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As a young person, I want to be successful. But I know that the way to success is not easy. I will try my best to overcome whatever the difficulties I would face. For some successful person, they would like to tell their stories because of deep impression it has made.Therefore, If we want to success,we need to make sure the goal.What are we going to do ? Do not let ourselves down.