单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;连词使用偏少。
My Favorite Sport Playing football is my favorite sport.I fall in love with it by chance. One day,I found a football on my home way.Then,I began to playing it with my friend.Sine I fell in love with playing football.I often played football with my classmate.We always trained and had many competitions with my classmate. My favorite football star is Beckham of Britain.My biggest wish is became a professional football player. I will love football forever.