文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富,层次欠清晰;连词使用偏少。
My Favorite Sport Playing football is my favorite sport.I fell in love with it by chance. One day,I found a football on my home way.Then,I began to play it with my friend.From then on,football became a important part of my life. I often played football with my classmates.We always trained and had many competitions with my classmates in order to improve our skills. My favorite football star is Beckham of Britain.My biggest wish is became a professional football player. I will love football forever.