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My Favorite Sport Playing football is my favorite sport.I fell in love with it by chance. One day,I found a football on my way home.Then,I began to play it with my friend.From then on,football became an important part of my life. I often played football with my classmates.We always trained and had many competitions with my classmates in order to improve our skills. My favorite football star is Beckham of Britain.It is not his handsome appearance but his skills that impress me a lot.My biggest wish became a professional football player. I will love football forever.