2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分学术词汇；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

When it comes to success,different people have their own perceptions.It may be a nice meal,a beautiful picture,high marks,happiness and so on.However,no matter what successes,I think,need almost three factors.Now,here are my views. Primarily,the most important thing is confidence.As we know that confidence makes a gigantic influence on people's achievements,because it can propel people ahead.What's more,it is the cradle of brave actions and thoughts,which are always the beginning of a achievement. Secondly,what need in a success is sufficient knowledge.There is no denying that truth abilities are keys to make events successful. Last but not least,creativity is also a important phrase,because it is the power to propel society newly and keep same speed with some developed counties,such as America. In conclusion,success is to realize the value of us,what we do is to use proper ways that can make ourselves useful.