2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowadays，the relationship between computer and man becomes more and more close. People study lessons , work, surf the Internet and even do shopping on the computer. There are numbers of people considering that the using of computer benefits to our life, making it so convenient. However, others who stand in a high position that the ability of people is dropping argue that the close relationship between computer and man makes people more dependent, which is exactly my viewpoint. As far as I am concerned, with the screen communication, the private conversation between people becomes more and more impossible.