高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中学术词汇使用较少，但单词拼写做的很棒；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；衔接成分偏少。

My hometown is located in the Tianshan Mountains，she has a name,Urumqi. You can see colorful flowers everywhere.It is a strong tree that besides one side of road. However, At that time, our houses were small and crowd, and the street was filled with mud. People worked hard all year round and lived a life of no more than poverty. But now great changes have taken place in this city. Cars and buses come and go busily,day and night. But with the development of this beautiful city, Environmental problems are the most important thing. It becoming more and more serious all over this city.Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers.To our joy, people have been doing their best to stop pollution and make the city even more beautiful. I love the fruits of the city which are famous in the world. I love the atmosphere here which attracts millions of foreigners every year.No matter what will happen, my love to this place will never be changed.