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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

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文中词汇表达较恰当,学术词汇表达灵活;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

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With the rapid development of science and with the integration of the global economy, computer has been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life. There is no doubt that the computer has brought about massive changes. And then, it makes more and more efficiently and conveniently in our day-to-day. Despite computer is extremely convenient,people takes the attitudes that they are afraid of own mind becoming computerized.Just as the saying , "the real danger is not that computer will begin to think like man ,but that man will begin to think like the computer ." From my point of view ,computer have great influence on human thinking . people cecomes more and more not creative and work regularly like the computer , which is terrible . Taking all these factors into consideration , we reasonably come to the conclusion that people should be more smart than computer and establish individual thinking .

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