2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章层次较为清晰；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

At present ,there are a number of commodities on excessive packaging .In order to make the commodties more beautiful,the manufature spend lots of packaging packing the ordinary commodities. Take a simple example of explaining the phenomenon,at autumn,the mooncakes with different kinds of packages are univesarily on sale all over the world.The more complex you pack the commodities,the higher status you will stand .So the package represents the status and one's face.Or someone want to give some suprise to their important people through the secret package. As far as I'm concerned,it is wasteful to pack commodities excessively.we should call on people not buying the commodties with excessive packages.Only when we all do like that ,can this phenomenon disppear.