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肥胖已经成为危害人们健康的严重问题，中小学生的肥胖趋势更为明显。你们班对此展开讨论。根据不同的观点，写一篇100词左右的短文。
2．中学生长身体的时候，减肥会影响身体发育，也会影响学习，因此应该顺其自然。
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Fatness nowadays,more and more people begin to realize the impotance of the problem of fatness.it can influance our health. especially high school students have the plomblem . some people think fatness is bad for our body.we should diet .exercise and prevention of obesity.obviousty, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the ploblem.Thus,we must be defeat fatness. On the contrary,others think reduce weight not only influance our Physical development，but also effects of learning.Don't care too much. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the latter.
