2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；作者能较熟练地使用多样的词汇表达，但请注意单词拼写的检查。

On Excessive Packsging Nowadays,we can see a product is packaged very beautiful in almost market to attrack constomers' attraction.For this situation,it is no dobut that more and more people pay much attention to personal face and they don't have a firm state of mind to refuse to the beautiful things' tempt. In my opinion,this phneminonen is a waste of resource to get short commercial prefits.At first,most of package paper is unrecyclable,this paper usually is abandoned after people turning on the packing box.Sometimes,the seller only to put emphsis on outward appearance,they ingoy the quality of their sell.So many constomers ofen complain they can't buy good products because of the seller. In fact,packaging also is a kind way to sell.But seller should improve the quality rather than the package.