2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

On Excessive Packsging Nowadays,we can see a product is packaged extremely beautiful in almost market to attack constomers' attaction.For this situation,it is no doubt that more and more people pay much attention to personal face and they don't have a firm state of mind to refuse to the beautiful things' tempt. In my opinion,this phneminonen is a waste of resource to get commercial profits.Firstly,most of package paper is unrecyclable,this paper for the most part is abandoned after people turning on the packing box.Sometimes,the seller only put emphasis on outward appearance,they ignore the quality of their sell.So many constomers often complain they can't buy good products because of the seller. In reality,packaging also is a way to sell.Nevertheless seller should improve the quality rather than the package.