2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇，也能较准确地使用学术词汇；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

The bar chart given by Bureau of Labor Statistics reflects the unemployment rate in 2011 has different in various people .most of people who less than high school diploma can't have a good job .from the graph above the education pays is very important. This is a thought-provoking state.two factor have contributed to this phenomenon.To begin with ,with the remarkable improving of living ,more and more student choose to batter study for having a good futher .they think is very important to do that . ,some student decided quit study in order to help family decline the burnen. They want to gain the chance to study but they must give up .so they don't have skillful technologic the people who gain the doctoral degree have ability to achieve the goal by company.and they have enough knowledge to improving the economic rate of company. as far as i'm concerned ,gaining a good degree is important to do that.We can learn a lot .it will improve our ability about skill and judgement .Only in this way can we gain the benefit of company.