2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(17):Life in the future

不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒；文章用词太过单一，文章拼写错误比较多；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

With the medicine of delvelopment,the man will get 120 ages with averge old.For new energe is coming ,the puplution preplomes will be controled.People will the more to change in daily life as well.For eaxmple,the robbot can do home things for me,the chair also can change with you wear clothes of colors, the phone can