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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13013
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
评语:

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

With the remarkable improving of the standard of living, more and more young people like to communicate with other by the computer or the telephone. I think communication is very important to us in various aspect. Communication plays an important role in our daily life. The reason for this are as follow. To begin with,communication can help us to fade away the bad emotion,you can communicate with your best friends to tell her anything about your disappointment or your loss. and she can help your outlet your bad emotion. Then,it is necessary to communicate with your boss in the company, you can tell he anything that your have a good plan to make money. Furthermore,it is extremely important to each other,we visit in my friends face to face,which can help us prompt our feelings of our friendship. All in all,I think communication is very important to keep our feelings,which can help us eliminate our generation gap.communication can let us keep good mood.

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