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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
能较准确地使用学术词汇，还需请作者增加词汇丰富度；简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；语言不流畅；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。
From:Hubin@163.com date:December 22th To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com I know that your company held the exhibition about named 5670 conduct in Niuyue in December 15th to 22th.I'm interested in that!And I hope you can price list and instruction to give us.Thank you for your cooperation and I hope we can establish business relationship.I look forward to your reply.
