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2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Behind The Dragon Boat Festival The forthcoming Dragon Boat Festival is always accompanied by three days's relax,which is all that will emerge from people's mind.Likewise ,no wonder that zongzi of all sorts of tastes,wrapped with colorful packages are piled on shelves in the supermarkets several days before the festival.In addition,for businessmen,failing to capture the opportunities to launch the promotion activity to sell goods is a tough call.Undoubtedly,the Dragon Boat Festival is an inviting opportunity.It seems that people are all bathed in the happiness of the Dragon Boat Festival.But I can firmly say that something is loosing gradually. There is a heated debated on the origin of the Dragon Boat Festival between China and the South Korea. A few years ago,the sussessful Dragon Boat Festival's application for the list of world heritage enraged many Chinese people.At the same time,the Chinese government took immediate measure to protect our own fentival-the Dragon Boat Festivial ,which is deeply rooted in China thousands years ago and a large mount of archieves can provide evidence to prove its real origin.But why do Chinese aware of the significant role of traditional Chinese festival till it is threatened by others?Obviously, people nowadays don't attach great importance of the festival and they can't fully understand their underlying meaning.Take the Dragon Boat Festival for example ,people just know a man called Qu Yuan ,who is related to it .Let alone other customs .As for Dragon Boat Racing ,which is an indispensable part of it ,is still not easy to see.Some other customs,such as wearing a sachet ,tying five colored rings,and driving away the five poisonous creatures as well as preventing disease by having fun are very unfamiliar to city dwellers and young people.They may even never heard of it.It is unimaginable that people one day will just know nothing about Dragon Boat Festival but zongzi. Something behind The Dragon Boat Festival should be seen by Chinese people.The traditional festivals are the gem of Chinese ancient culture.We must value them and develop them ,because they are the symbol of the soft power of one country.It is time to take immediate action to protect our invaluable treasure.