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As a student, we can get a certain a mount of money from parents as our allowance, we should not only study hard in school,but also learn to save money. there are several points to back up my opinion. At first, our priority in universtiy is to study,money is got from our parents. we buy group-sale goods and we collect all kinds of cupons to release some burden of our parents. Secondly, the commodities in a sale do not mean bad quality, we can buy more things with the same amount of money, wouldn't we be happier? Thirdly, saving money is not a temporarily things to do in the universtiy, but we can save some money out and hand it over to some charity party to do some good deeds. In conclusion, saving money is one of the virtues of Chinese culture, we should hold it with our life, and help more people by it.
