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Different people have different dream's.I am not an exception.When I was young. I dream of being a police woman.Up to now, I have also deramet a police.Why is this my dream? Becase,I think police is a great successful career. They can carry bad person.Hardly have dangerous when they appeearnce.What's more, They can protect our country. Now,In order to come true my dream.I will make every efforts for my study. Becoming a police protect our society.