2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(42):和老师建立良好的师生关系

简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；文中词汇表达不够丰富，学术词汇方面要多累积；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Different people have different dream's.I am not an exception.When I was young. I dream of being a police woman.Up to now, I have also dreamt a policewoman.Why is this my dream? Becase,I think police is a great sacred career. They can carry bad person.Hardly have dangerous when they appeearnce.What's more, They can protect our country. Now,In order to come true my dream.I will make every efforts for my study. Becoming a police protect our society.