2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

The man have been living on the earth for a long time. We keep trying to make the life more wondful and easier with inventing many tools, machines. I will choose the computer to be the NO.1 invention from of old. The computer almost spread in every corners of our lives and really make our lives more covenient. You can finish your papers, works, writting with a lot of softwares' help. Besides you could also do some readings, watch movies, communicate with others, buy things without leaving home, visiting everywhere of the world you want to see. There are so many things you can do with your computer. So we do need to master the computer skills and use them in our lives and then you will find it's really fascinated.