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Different people have different dream's.I am not an exception.When I was young. I dream of being a police woman.Up to now, I have also dreamt a policewoman.Why is this my dream? Becase,I think police is a great sacred career. They can carry a bad person.Hardly have dangerous when the appearance.What's more, They can protect our country. Now,In order to come true my dream.I will make every efforts for my study. as a policewoman protects our society.