高一英语作文模拟题:写信介绍中秋节

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Dear Tom, I remembered that you will come to China with your parents.And you will have a holiday about Mid Autumn Day in China. Mid Autumn Day is one of the most traditional festival in China.It has a long history and it has a good meaning.Mid Autumn Day always means that everyone will get together with their families.Every families will eat the special food,and it named moon cakes.It has delicious taste.I think you will like it.Last,in the midnight,we can enjoy the glorious moon. I am extremely glad that you will come to China.In our country,you will enjoy yourself.