题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色。
Nowadays, economic products becomes more and more popular, especially the computers. There are a lot of events that children are trapped in visual world happening,which should attracts our attention. In my eyes, computers should be a way that helps people solve the questions more quickly, also, it can decrease the distance between us people and increase the relationship. But, it has some bad effect, for example, the computer games make many children trapped in and result in the result they give up the studyand even lose their life, which makes us very sad.Therefore, computers have two different sides like the coins, if we can use them properly,they can be a useful tool. If not, we will pay for it. So, the most important for us is to educate our generations about how to use computers properly and why, at the same time, parents should also do something for kids.