题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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Nowadays, economic products become more and more popular, especially the computers. There are a lot of events that children are trapped in visual world ,which should attract our attention. In my eyes, computers should be a way that helps people solve the problems more quickly, also, it can decrease the distance between us people and increase the relationship. But, it has some bad effect, for example, the computer games make many children trapped in and result in the result they give up the study and even lose their life, which makes us very sad.Therefore, computers have two different sides like the coins, and if we can use them properly,they can be a useful tool. If not, we will pay for it. So, the most important for us is to educate our generations about how to use computers properly and why, at the same time, parents should also do something for kids.