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2001年1月英语六级作文真题:面试成功的因素

发布时间:2013-05-14 19:08浏览次数:2299[网页划词已开启]
要求:

Directions:  For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 

1. 面试在求职过程中的作用  

2. 取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……   

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作者词汇量积累较好,但学术词汇的积累仍需加强,还要避免有拼写错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;采用了一些简单的从句。

用户练习作文:

today,we will talk about the interview playing an essential role in finding a job.most of us who face challenge for getting a career need to prepare for an interview.An interview is a direct way for employers to know the characteristic of you .so,it is indispensible that employees must armed with a successful interview. there are numorous ingredicts attribute to an vigorous an high interview.first an foremost,Courtesy is vital for a employee.as the old saying:polite is more impotant than smart.moreover,don't be shy ,confidence can help you dig your abilities that ofen are invisiable.importantly, With anthentic and professional abilities ,employees can take responsible for there furture position. In short,we should arm ourselves with all kinds of ablilities,neither mental nor physical.only in this way can we obtain a vocation which we wanted.

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