小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have spent a busy weekend with tire.I went out to part-time job,selling the drink.Contrary to all expections, I can handle it well by myself without few trainings.A case in point is I wearing skirts to sell with some words that I never talk brfore. Some words surprised myself too. During these prosess，I meet all kinds of different people,some are friendly,some are mean.But I won't be afraid of it.I feel pround of my bravery,trying something I never have done.For that matter,I have learned that not everyone jude a person by the appearence.I kewn that only those who are postive and initiative can be sucessful .Tough tired ,but I was happy because of earning mony.