2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

computer and man the first computer made in 1940s ,it is a very big machine.its purpose is for the operation of the maths.afterward, the computer is made for alleviating the burden ,it help man take the routine work .the invention of the computer improve the efficiency of the work which man engage,the computer is constantly and fast evolving these days ,special recent two decades years ,it get a sharp development .it pervade all the fields of science.it straightly affects the life of the human being . now ,human being rely more and more on the computer ,specially ,when the time of the internet comes,human being get close connection with the computer .it leads to the backset of the mental and physical ability ,it do all kinds of some physicalwork and mental work stead of people ,human being dont need to think a lot and to engage physical work ,this made people's brain become simple and people's body become weak. it is a fact that human being is degrading as the science of computer is evolving.now ,someone worry that the computer will control the earth stead of human being as a new ruler in the future.