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简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；学术词汇偏少，且文中有部分拼写错误。
Dear xiaowang, It is my honour to recieve your letter which you said that you are going to see me on the holiday.Since last meet at the school ,we have not seen each other for along time. Remembering last summer vacation,you do your best to entertain me.This time I will be a host for you to show you around.My suggestions as follows. Firstly,I plan to cook for you by myself at home.By this way,we can enjoin a intimate chatting about personal secrets.Second,Shopping and eating are both indispensable.Crazy shopping is best way to cultivate our friendship.Eating all delious foods，I remember，are your dream.last but the most important ,I will show you around the prosperity saneraies that only can be saw here. That's all my idears.At last,I need to remind you of that tell me what food do best like and bring your indeed beautiful closes in that we will take pictures. Watting for your coming. lovey xiaowang
