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Dear xiaowang, It is my honour to receive your letter which you said that you are going to see me on holiday.Since the last time I met at the school,we have not seen each other for a long time. Remembering last summer vacation,you make the best efforts totreat me.This time I will be a host for you to show you around.My suggestions are as follows. Firstly,I plan to cook for you by myself at home.By this way,we can enjoin an intimate chatting about personal secrets.Second,Shopping and eating are both indispensable.Crazy shopping is best way to cultivate our friendship.Eating the delicious food，I remember，is your dream.Last but the most important,I will show you around the prosperity scenery that only can be seeing here. That's all my ideas.At last,I need to remind you that tell me what food do you like best and bring your indeed beautiful closes in that we will take pictures. Watting for your coming. lovey xiaowang
