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An announcement for a voluntary program With the development of our country , many cities have built a strong economic system. However, there is a big number of countrysides that are very poor, and even some of them are concerned about their average life everyday. What should we do? Recently, our school will open a voluntary program for teaching in poor countrysides. Now there is an announcement in next there days. About this program, it last about one month in Sichuang; we will teach students some knowledge which couldn't learn by their own teachers, such as how to become a honest man ,how to let them study by themselves and so on. If you are interested in this activity, please let us know and call 123456789, and we will give you a complete explain . Welcome to join us and help someone together.
